Dude honestly
Listen to some real music like jazz, blues or metal (NOT RAP METAL J00 PENOR) and stop rapping.
Nearly every person has beat u in a rap battle cause theres has been funny and not try hard, and your music, did u go to the store and buy mix match dj because it sure sounds like it with all those fuckin random noises.
well in good tradition, "DJ SPIN THAT 2 SIDED PLATNUM RECORD MAJIG"
*gay rap beat*
JOO ARE TEH PENOR
JOO LET BEDN SUCK OFF JOOR WEINOR
JOO ARE A WILLEH
AND IM NOT BEING TEH SILLEH
JOO THING JOO RIDE "HARDCORE"
MOST PEOPLE IN THE GHETTO ARE POOR
BUT JOO HAVE A COM-PU-TOR
WHICH HAS TEH INTRAWEB-ZOR
STOP RAPPING AND GO GET A FREIDN
JOOR GAYZOR SO GO SUCK OFF JOSH BEDN
TEH NO RESPECT FOR JOOR WIGGER RAPPING
IM TEH HATER LEWL.